tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7115344641664917654.post7433636052044074992..comments2023-10-08T17:17:52.429+05:30Comments on THE WORLD INSIDE: Love and TimeAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07586453511841184224noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7115344641664917654.post-15473957110188401782010-09-15T22:25:11.487+05:302010-09-15T22:25:11.487+05:30Very very clear and direct, leaves no doubt in any...Very very clear and direct, leaves no doubt in anyone's mind about the sincerity of your emotions and intentions...however, one has come to expect more flowery language, symbolism, similes, metaphors, and other forms of beauty from poetry in general, and something that can be more classical in approach...I think you need to add more to it, if you want it to be admired as poetry. If you want to declare your love, then it's ideal, it speaks directly to the heart! Depends on your aim for this love poem...I, of course adore it completely! :-)Priyanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7115344641664917654.post-61344481729224852062010-09-16T10:16:11.675+05:302010-09-16T10:16:11.675+05:30cute! i disagree with the above comment that expec...cute! i disagree with the above comment that expects more flowery language. i think simplicity is key. :)Mehakhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02851514258259153850noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7115344641664917654.post-85436262937775693852010-09-16T17:56:33.927+05:302010-09-16T17:56:33.927+05:30Beautiful.. I cant tell you how much I loved it. A...Beautiful.. I cant tell you how much I loved it. Also the picture is sooo good. Very Beautifully written Imran.Zainab Uroojhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05390508462512778747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7115344641664917654.post-27030033979282475692010-09-16T19:57:35.997+05:302010-09-16T19:57:35.997+05:30@ Priya: Point taken madame...I was actually going...@ Priya: Point taken madame...I was actually going for a simple hum-able rhyme. But I agree there need to be more layers, I think I should start reading more :) But thank you again...I knew you would like it though!<br><br>@Mahek: Thank you so much! I agree with the simplicity argument though :)<br><br>@Zainab: Thank u for the compliment and just a technicality...but my name is Imroz :PIMROZ NAQVIhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07586453511841184224noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7115344641664917654.post-74150063131877865892010-09-17T12:19:51.078+05:302010-09-17T12:19:51.078+05:30Oops. Sorry for the confusionOops. Sorry for the confusionZainab Uroojhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05390508462512778747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7115344641664917654.post-1673350447859926122010-09-17T13:25:29.256+05:302010-09-17T13:25:29.256+05:30So simple yet so thoughtful.I don't like much ...So simple yet so thoughtful.<br>I don't like much poems but your was a good one.Abhishekhttp://bhardwajme.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7115344641664917654.post-17943354744011241962010-09-17T14:24:52.420+05:302010-09-17T14:24:52.420+05:30As I always say, if people can relate to your piec...As I always say, if people can relate to your piece of writing...it means it's good...I could...:)<br><br>Simple adnd touching...<br><br>Well written...:)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7115344641664917654.post-89786795299851470162010-09-20T14:34:26.729+05:302010-09-20T14:34:26.729+05:30Aiyoooo.... it took me to my kindergarten days. So...Aiyoooo.... it took me to my kindergarten days. So sweet, simple, and in rhythm. very very nice. U know I loved it. Anyway I don't understand much of symbolic and metaphoric stuff. So this is great. Yuppy my puppy!!!anindita sarkarhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01960979262321621449noreply@blogger.com