Tuesday, May 5, 2009

Why does it feel so right?


And you say, you love me tonight,
you kiss me, and you hold me tight,
at this moment, everything seems all right,
emotions, intimacy all at their height,

But how long will this last, how long must I wait,
Till we are together again,
will u ever return, will u miss that train,
just so you can see my smile again,

I am tired of motels and hotel rooms,
I am tired of being your shadow groom,
If everything about us needs to be so discrete,
Let's not love, let's not ever meet,

I want you to stay and never leave,
I want a home, a family and dreams in between,
I want to able to wish for you tonight,
and not find you gone by morning light,

And you say, you love me tonight,
you kiss me, and you hold me tight,
at this moment, everything seems all right,
emotions, intimacy all at their height,

You want my love, my soul, my everything,
then why am I the one waiting for the phone to ring,
my ambitions, my dreams to your door I bring,
All I return with is despair and longing,

Measure these words from a beatles rhyme,
sentiments I'd want you to cultivate,
"And in the end, the love you take,
is equal to the love you make"

So you say, you love me tonight,
you kiss me, and you hold me tight,
at this moment, when everything seems so wrong,
why does it still feel so right?
why does it still feel so right?

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

Earlier I used to point out speciifc lines or few words from ur posts, which I liked...or which would just hit me..but this entire piece is just too good...!
Love the beautiful way u capture the feelings:)
Just so smooth and serene...

Not many people understand love and companionship the way u do...and then pen down the way u understand and feel is just amazing...

The title too is just apt...besides all the chaos in ur head...u dnt knw y..but it seems RIGHT:)

Wish I cud write like u sometimes...

Ur fan:)

Preeta said...

Hey...thx for ur comment on my "untitled" poem...i surprised myself....it had a sad touch to it...which is not the typical me :)

as for ur latest...it is just super!!!

IMROZ NAQVI said...

Thankyou Preeta. Your poem deserved the praise..well done..I guess I relate more when there is a grey shade. I think you can write even better, explore your dark side :)