I try to hide the fears now,
nurse them with hope,
Don't you test my will now,
my spirit's almost broke,
I was just about to drown now,
if not for your support,
why keep me alive now,
if not to hold me close,
I'm learning to breathe again now,
your life in every stroke,
There's no turning back now,
my ship has set its course.
6 comments:
Absolutely stunning play of words. I love the phrase, 'my spirit's almost broke'. Awesome poem!
@Saru: Thankyou so much and welcome to the blog, hope you keep coming back :)
painful courage!
very nice poem :)
@sowmya: Thank you :)
Impresive.. and nice way of ending with now.. though it looked a bit redundant..
On the whole it was very passionate..!
@KP: I'm glad you liked it :)
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